Making the Difference - Chapter One

Making the Difference - Chapter One


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  • #1

    Geoff Parkes (Englang Books) (Saturday, 17 November 2018 18:58)

    Good opening, which has the potential to draw readers in.
    There's one glaring spelling mistake!
    Desert = sandy wasteland,e.g. the Sahara.
    Dessert = what follows the main course, e.g. apple pie and custard.
    Contact me if you need a proofreader: geoffy99@gmail.com

    Best of luck with your publications.

  • #2

    Bettina von Cossel (Sunday, 18 November 2018 01:41)

    Geoff, you’re wonderful, thank you very much! Of course it should be dessert, and we’ll change it straight away!
    Do we know each other from Swanwick? Your name sounds rather familiar.
    Kind regards,
    Bettina

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